HOLY FLYING CHEESEWHEEL YES!

I am almost done with my four chpater thing and the story is finally getting good! Hopefully you like it! Here is my rough copy of all the chapters so far! i hope you'll like the story! Here check it put!
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4 dark
4 night

introduction: This is just a basic story aboyt four friends who happen to come across a strange and abandoned town where people look the same like everyone else but they hold a deadly secret. These are people who have come across this same village long ago and were cursed with either be given the penelty of death if they try to run or even tell anyone outside about this place, or they are turned into beasts who hunger for blood and flesh. (Not exactly vampyres, ((all different beasts not all the same.)).) Could this dangerous secret get out of hand when they discover why they don't want you to tell any outsiders? Could this lead to the death of all of the friends? Read chapter one and see what happens next!

Characters: As i said there are Four main characters in chapter one. I will add more to the list later!

[1] Sunny- HarvestMoonJunkie- Yes she is in this because she asked me! Don't get mad at me! I can put you in the story if you want me to!
A young rebellious girl with red and black hair who never plays by rules except when love is at stake!

[2] Fruit Roll Up or Hublae Booblae-Friend from school- He is in this because what if there is a hungry werewolf that needs something big and chewy in it's mouth? That's why he is here. He is actually a good person and under all that fat there is a heart that cares!

[3] Sarah- old friend- this is one of my very old friends which moved away from me in second grade and she never said goodbye so she gets to be werewolf meat too except with no mercy! (if you haven't got the message yet than you should know that i can carry a mean grudge for a very long time!)

[4] Chris-Sunny's lover- another request by HarvestMoonJunkie cause she never goes anywhere without him! He to is rebellious but no matter what he never cares about the rules and nothing ever stops him from making out with his girl at any place at any time! He has blackish hair with stubble going across his cheeks to the center of his face.

[5] Anthony- my boyfriend- i wanted to out my boyfriend in this too because sunny and chris would never hang out with me 'cause they would be to busy making out and stuff. Short black hair with almond colored eyes. Not as courageous as Chris but he still is a little nicer than Chris though. (Don't get mad at me HarvestMoonJunkie!)

[6] Kay-good school friend-a smart and kind-hearted young girl with very long brown hair. She takes more risks and isn't afraid to speak out or defend herself from someone and throw a few punches if she needs to. She is a very good friend and will stick up for her buddies when they are in deep trouble or they are getting bullied.

[7] Brandon-b55bwhyte- a shy young boy who gets in trouble faster than i get into a new bag of potato chips! (that's pretty fast! seriously!) He's a little chubby but he can still be a kind enough person to care about his female compadres. (oh i see how it is!) He will stand by stand by you thick and thin (leaning more towards that thick side). (meaning he is a good friend not fat! -_-'

[8] Kat- ShadowWooper3-me- another reckless one with hidden potential that loves to be released. Not really the best person who has an anger problem (meaning she heats up fast and takes awhile to cool down!) She has medium length hair which is a very dark brown with her crystal blue eyes, curiously watching the world around her as she plans on her next move...
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Chapter one:
It was a dark and bleak morning and the school lights were just starting to flash on as the students filled the halls with themselves and their constant uproar of talking. Everyone was starting to go to their first period class. I was just getting the last few things from my locker, shutting the cold green door closed. I turned around seeing Anthony was standing directly behind me.
"Holy flying cheesewheel!" I screamed.
"Nice welcome, so what class are you going to this fine morning babe?" He asked me with a smile.
"Science Mrs. Calak. Where are you going?" I said smiling back at her.
"Science with you. Would you like to walk with me?" He said looking down and blushing.
"Sure Anthony! I would love to!" I said with a nice non-sarcastic smile. He smiled back at me as we started to walk to Mrs. Calak's room which was on the other side of the building. We walked through the courtyard where we saw Sunny and Chris making-out on one of the benches. (As usual) She wasn't a slut like most of the people here, she just really loved Chris and didn't care about what people think about her or her lover! (well maybe those things and she would totally kick their asses if they ever said something bad about him!) The late bell rang and me and Anthony ran into Mrs. Calak's room luckily before she got there. Me and Anthony sat in two seats next to eachother and started to do the work she assigned us. Later, (about halfway through the period,) Anthony handed a note with a small heart on it. It said:
Kat,
I was wondering if you would like to go on a date with me sometime.
[] yes [] like hell [] maybe.... []piss off

Is smiled and checked one of the boxes and handed it back to him. I saw him smile and under his breath mutter 'yes'. After another few minutes the bell rang and Anthony was still smiling at me and partially blushing with his black hair covering him face and concealing his beatiful almond colored eyes.
I continued to smile at him until we left the room. (we didn't have period two together ) I have him a kiss on the cheek as we went our seperate ways.
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Chapter Two
In math class Sunny and Chris sat next to eachother holding hands while we watched a stupid Disney movie (don't get mad disney!) I kept staring at them because they were the cutest couple in the whole school. Everyone knew they were a couple and they let it pass them by. One main girl in the school dated any guy, girlfriend or not. Her name was Sarah, Sarah the slut. (as we call her) I was worried that maybe she would steal Chris from Sunny, but I knew that would never happen. Sunny wouldn't allow it. I couldn't sit still i just kept thinking of Anthony, Anthony and even more Anthony! He hit where it really counts....the heart. I instanly feel in love with him! His beautiful hair, lovely almond colored eyes and his melodic voice which just put me into a trance! He was just so perfect! (and hot!)
"Teacher can I go to the bathroom please?" i asked him politly.
"Why of course! Just sign out and take the pass." He said in his rough and tumbling voice. I walked through the halls and saw a boy hunched over along the walls of the classroom. (Meaning he got kicked out of the room for bieng bad). He had dark hair and wore all black? Wow looks like someone else I saw last period doesn't it. As i walked over he immediatley picked his head up to see who it was coming down the hall. It was Johnny. He was the kind of bully that would beat you up for no reason even if you were a girl! I had to get out of there or else I would be Chop Suey! (awesome System of a down song!) I turned around to go back to my classroom. He got up without me knowing and his hands were on my shoulders. Making me paralyzed out of fright. He turned me around.
"Awww where are you going Kat? You just got here!" He stared at me with an innocent smile.
"Let go of me John!" There was anger in my eyes. I had my whole life of hurt that has been building up since i was a littlle kid. I was not to be messed with. I had a feeling i was going to get my hands dirty. I gave him a smile, one that someone who was lying to you would have.
"Aww what i know you have always been pissed at me but i can be nic-..." His sentance was cut short i was grabbing his shoulders. He was not sure what i was going to do to him. I slammed him againest the lockers.
"Oof." he said as his back hit the lockers.
" Do not mess with me John! I mean it this time! i walked away as he went back into his classroom like a dog running away with it's tail between their legs. And that would be his last warning and next time he would be a bloody carcass that was 'mysteriously' found on the stairs like a dead deer thrown off the side of the road for the scavengers would eat up. That would be the last time anyone did that to me or my friends. The last frickin' time.
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Chapter 3

Math class was just about over and the movie the substitute, Mr. Ham, showing was nearly over. Mr. Ham himself he was fast asleep and so was half of the other people in the classroom. Everyone was talking other people from different classes were inside watching the movie with their friends. The only two that weren't talking were Me, Sunny and Chris. Sunny had her head on his shoulders and Chris had his arm around her waist. They were the cutest couple in the school. Many of times the section in the yearbook labeled cutest couple had been given to them. My opinion was that they deserved it. They were the cutest couple at the school. Not even I could take that from them. The dismissal bell rang telling you it was time to go to your next class.
Many periods (class periods) had passed and many make-out seesions passed again and again between Sunny and Chris. I was walking to my advisory (study hall, quiet study whatever you want to call it,) when Sarah Slut came and stopped me.
"Hey, I hope you know that me and Anthony are going out so don't even think about stealing him yo-"
"You two are not dating! You have never dated a single guy in your entire life and really doubt he would like a slut like you!"
"Ugh! Well just don't touch my Anthony!"
"Well he's the one who asked me out! Go ask him yourself! Maybe you should ask him what girl he wants to date to!"
"Maybe I will! Hmph!" She walked away and I walked to my study hall thinking who he would choose. Me or the slut..?
I walked into the room and saw Anthony talking to Sunny and Chris two stopped making-out for the moment? Wow that's a shocker!" I sat down in an empty desk next to Anthony. He looked up to see who was sitting next to him and he smiled to see it was me.
"Hey ba-" He looked and saw Sarah in front of me and i was frowning deeper than an old person who doesn't get their apple sauce.
"Hey Anthony baby!" She went to kiss until i made another one of my rude comments whcih was:
"Why do you have to ruin everything Sarah?"
"Ugh!" she said something else under her breath but i couldn't hear it. "Oh yeah Anthony baby i have a question to ask you! Which one would you like to go out with more. Me or this faggot?" My frown deepened and i thought i just got a wrinkle for frowning so hard and so much. I saw him look back and forth between us both. When i saw that my frown deepened even more then i couldn't feel my cheeks.
"Okay Sarah i have something to ask you before i answer. We were never dating so who says i have a choice between you and her? Why don't you just ask me will you go out with Kat or not? That would be a more reasonable question to ask!" He said standing up. The teacher looked over and said:
"Anthony! If you going to do that atleast do that where you won't embarrass yourself now sit down and stop popping a morgan!"
"Shut up Mrs. Bartels! Nobody understands your old person speaking language! Just shut up!" I shouted.
"Oh doozie!"
"See nobody knows what you are saying so just go mute or just never talk again!"
"Bu-"
"No i said no more speaking unless you can learn the english language!" She put her head down on her desk.
"So where were we in this conversation?" I said tilting my head.
What i didn't notice was that Sarah let awhile ago and Anthony was closer to me and Sunny and Chris were doing their homework together. "So i'm guessing the conversation ended between who you are going to da-" I stopped. My eyes widened when i saw his hand on my hand and he was hugging me.
"I choose you. I would never want a psycho crazy slut on my case! Plus i love you more." I blushed even more. I went to hug him again when i relized that he deserved more than just a sissy little hug. He was one of the only people who told me they loved me and ment it! So i wasn't going to give him some sissy hug! I was going to give him something that only he can have! He opened his arms expecting a hug but instead i put my arms around his neck and kissed him. His eyes widened and he started to blush even more. I knew he would have never expected this to happen.

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Chapter 4
Mrs. S stormed into the room with her poofy hair as normal.
"Kat! Anthony! Get your little butts in my room now!" She grabbed us by the arms and pulled us out of the rooms.
"You have to set up flyers around the school to tell people when our band concert is!"
"Oops sorry Ronald McDonald. We'll do it." She looked down at me like she was about to slap me in the face or something.:
"Na na no. Not together. Seperately! You'll talk to much you little love birds!" She said handing us each a huge stack of flyers. "Now get to work!" She walked off as we both gave her a disgusted look. We went our seperate ways and started to hang up flyers. As usual I saw over ten people making out in the hall. I rolled my eyes due to jealousy because mrs. poofy hair always ruins everything. When i was nearly done, I saw two boys talking to eachother. I shouldn't go down there or even look in their direction. I walked back to my class and already saw Anthony back. He had his head on the desk asleep. I sat in the seat next to him and waited until I saw Sunny was missing. I remebered seeing another person coming down the hall away from those other boys. The teacher was asleep, snoring louder than ever. Chris had a distressed expression on his face. I started to worry. But then I knew, Sunny could sure enough take care of herself. She had the strength and quickness of a wolf. She always seemed like on to, not to mention look like one. (Not an insult Sunny!!) The first time i saw her, she looked like a wolf, which really looked different from the others.
So i didn't worry, she would sure enough kick their asses and get back here five minutes before the bell rang.
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Chapter 5
I was right. Sunny did handle herself. The two men from the hall were on the ground with a little pool of blood leaking from their mouth to where she had punched them both. She was looking down and breathing hard and had her hands clenched into a fist. She had blood on her finger nails and on her arms showing that put up a little fight before they were knocked un concious. She wouldn't get in trouble because she was just defending herself from two bullies who really couldn't defend themselves. The bell finally rang and Anthony's head shot up faster than a bullet shot out of a gun.
"Huh?" He said in a groggy tone because he just woke up from a nice study hall sleep. I was already put of the room and talking to Sunny about her fight.
" They picked a fight with the wrong person. They should have seen it coming too." She put her books in her locker than we started to walk to lunch.
"Cool babe." It was Chris. He was behind us and had over heard our conversation about her fight with the two "bullies".
He put his arm around her waist as we kept walking to lunch. I saw some of our other friends like Kay and a few others. We sat at a large green table with crappy chairs which was basically the best table there. Soon the lunch room was crowded with so many freshmen, sophomores, juniors, and a couple seniors. I saw Anthony at his friends' table and they were talking while pointing at different girls. We continued to converse with eachother while the lunch period went on and on. After awhile the boys at Anthony's table were looking at hom to see which girl he was going to point to. (I i had no idea what they were doing with the pointing of fingers.) I saw him scan the room, then he pointed at me and said soemthing but he was to far away to hear it. I atleast saw him blush when he pointed at me and he noticed I saw him do it. I smiled back at him. He smiled and waved at me.
It was a half day so it was already time to leave. So i packed my stuff and left. I never took the bus. I thought it would be better for me if i just walked home. I might have been like 50-100 miles from home but i didn't care. As long as some pervert doesn't stop and try to abduct me.
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Chapter 6
I was walking home from school. I saw some people driving home and some people getting driven home. Then the worst thing happened, a person from my school pulled over. It was John.
"Hey babe." he said with a smirk.
"Piss off Johnny Boy!" He hated it when i called him that. "What do you want now?"
"Get in the car babe. You know what i want." He said motioning me to go nearer to his chevy pick em up truck. (yes i had to say it like that!) I froze in fear. I had nowhere to go except over the guard rail and down to the railroad tracks below.
"Come on babe. You know you want m-." his face paused. I didn't care. I jumped over the guardrail and smashed into the railroad tracks below. I thought i was dead until this ear piercing noise had woken me from my almost-death. It was a train whistle meaning i was to be dead if i got run over by a train! I got up, not caring that i had broke all the bones in my legs, and walked into the forest. The train passed by a few minutes later with it's loud and ear piercing whistle. I sat on a nearby rock To check my wounds. I was scared to see that my leg bones were not broken, and there was no blood. My eyes widened. My legs should have been broken and there should have been blood everywhere. I looked around and i saw a large bird sitting on the rock next to me. It was aa great blue heron, My sister's spirit animal. (When she was alive.) I stroked it's beautiful blue and misty colored feathers as it reminded me more and more of my dead and gone sister.
"Were you the one who saved me?"
"Yes I was. How'd you know?"
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Chapter 7 (one of the shortest chapters)

"Wait....are you my -?"
"No I am not related to you. I am Seth. I used to live with her. I am not her."
"Ooh! Now I remember you Se-." I stopped and saw that He was looking in the other direction. I heard the bushes rustle, then a dark, medium sized picture appeared, walking towards me and Seth. It was John?! He had followed me? How weird!
"I found you! Oh look you have a birdy friend too! Am I going to have to jump over a guard rail to get it too?" He gave me a evil smirk and started to run towards Seth at top speed in his retard run. Seth smiled (how he has a beak) and started to fly off before John got over to him. He stopped them turned to me with this stupid smile on his face.
"Well I guess the birdy didn't want to be around you either. Well I wouldn't say that I am like the birdy." He started to walk over in his slow and stupid walk.
"Seth, why did you have to leave? Now I'm gonna get raped by this creep!" John started to run faster and faster due to the insults pissing him off. I saw him stop. And his eyes show no emotion at all. Something jumped in front of me in the middle of me and John. It had a wolf like body and was pointed towards John. Of course John was stupid enough to turn his back and start running back into the woods to his Chevy.
"Big mistake." The wolf lunged at him, tackling him down. In a few minutes, John was dead and the wolf was eating his dead corpse. It turned to me with it's dark colored eyes. It's ears perked up, like it was trying to hear something in the distance. It sat down and looked into the sky. Within a few moments, Seth appeared in the horizon, flapping his tremendous wings.
"Hello Seth. What brings you to these parts? Saying hello to my sister again are we?" The wolf said looking up at Seth with a curious look in her eyes as she stood up to greet him.





Okay i know that most of these chapters are really short but on my computer the font and everything else was different so i have to work on making the chapters longer. Hope you like the story so far!